Beyond the Book ~ Detour: Scene from Cutting Room Floor

talc-beyondtbooktalccutfloor-detourBeyond the Book is about the idea, insights or concepts of how a book came to be.

This month’s for Beyond the Book I’ll be giving insights into Detour (Something in Common, Book # 1).

I’m sharing with you a brief part of a scene from the cutting room floor. It didn’t make it into a final copy of a story. Not even the publisher has read or seen it. This is unedited. Enjoy.

A scene from the Cutting Room Floor
By: Talia Carmichael
TC Free Read
January 2017
Genre: Contemporary
Series: Something in Common
Length: Scene

Watching Robert eat an ice cream cone was going to kill Miguel. The man had no idea how much he wanted him. The giving him time to figure it out was painful. Miguel shifted to ease the pressure on his erection. Robert just continued swirling his tongue on the ice cream oblivious ot the agony Miguel was in.

I’d like him to lick me like that. Miguel followed with his gaze the path Robert was taking as he licked. The sounds Robert was making should be illegal. It was wanton and Miguel wanted to be the one making him make those sounds.

Suddenly Robert stopped and looked at him. “Don’t you want your ice cream?”

Robert got that cute wrinkle between his eyes as he asked.

Only if I can lick it off you. Instead Miguel said aloud. “Yeah.” He gave his own creamy confection a slow deliberate lick.

Robert stared and Miguel held back a grin. Yeah you’re going to be mine soon.

Copyright © Talia Carmichael, 2017.
All Rights Reserved.

This as well as other sneak peeks, deleted scenes, more Interlude (a brief scene that is after the end of the story that features a couple/some of characters from one of my published books/series) and many other things are at times posted to my group on facebook Talia Carmichael Book Nook before it is posted anywhere else. 🙂

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About Talia Carmichael

Talia Carmichael is an author who writes sexy stories in a variety of genres. She believes in creating stories that encompass all that falling in love or lust entails. From the highs of that first blush of attraction to the lows of not knowing if you can make your coming together as a couple work. Then, finally to the acceptance of the reality of making a life together. It’s all about the journey. Among, her books you’ll find contemporary, futuristic, fantasy, and paranormal settings with m/m and ménage themes that will have a happily ever after. Books that will be passionate, intense and real … to fill the craving.
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